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I think I'm going to have to go back and reread the earlier sections of this story. This section drew me deep into the story and now I find that I'm interested in what your footnotes say. I didn't realize it before, but they provide little pieces of lore in the larger story.

I'm starting to like Ratcliff more and more. Sael is interesting, as is the different classes of magic users.

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Im stoked to hear that. I felt pretty good about how this chapter unfolded, and the storyline is progressing now to the place where i can push things in a… more complicated direction.

And yes, the footnotes aren’t always jokes. I do find them useful as a means of providing context and lore. Particularly intrigue lore.

Im just beginning to scratch the surface of the weirdness of magic.

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